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a review on JCK submitted by jck2.
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nice bass
This seems like the type of song you would have on your car too show off your bass system, i dont know if thats good or bad, the song is alright same with the mood and the performance.
- josht_canada from Canada on 5Oct2006
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a twist
a new twist on the game i like it its pretty good good yea id buy it
- dice_84 from Escanaba, Michigan on 16Sep2006
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Boring
The beat is terribly lacking. The extremely repetitive synth bassline become very tedious very quickly. The occassional scratch sample sounds very General Midi - a big nono.
The vocal delivery is uninteresting, except for the chorus section, which, if it wasn't so dissonant, would sound very cool.
The mix overall is very poorly done. The track is overcompressed and clips all over the place. There are absolutely no dynamics...no 'oomph' to the kick.
- sonus from Park Ridge, Illinois on 13Sep2006
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I really like this track - the beat is fresh.
I see where you're going with this track - and although I have to admit that I wasn't really feeling the vocal delivery - I can say that I'm feeling the content and when the emceeing flipped up into the sing-song kind of delivery - that was tight. Almost that early 90's techno-rock kind of thing, and it really worked well in this song. The second set of vocals needed a lot of practice too - polish it up and re-record it. I'm digging the gritty, dark feel to this track - I hope to hear new versions of it with improvements to the vocals and mixdown.
- supanamu from Santa Maria/San Luis Obispo/Sa, California on 13Sep2006
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no no no
i do not like this song the performance was lacking something it really didnt have a direction the song i dont like it and the mood????
- blazefive from Las Vegas, Nevada on 11Sep2006
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hip hop techno
Hip hop Lyrics over a Techno type beat could be the near future. You sold it though i mean theres many of sh** out there that dont sound half as good. The chorus isnt the best either.
- GeorgeCruz from Murray, Kentucky on 11Sep2006
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This is different
The production sounds like it was done on a Casio, and the song was very hard to follow. Im still not sure what the song was about. I commend the artist for thinking out of the box on this song but sometimes when you take a chance it just doesnt work.
- Colbertsteve from Jacksonville, Florida on 6Sep2006
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HUH?
OKAY I WASNT MAD AT THE PRODUCTION IN THE BEGINING BUT IT QUICKLY GOT REPPETITIVE. THE FIRST GUY KINDA SOUNDED LIKE SLICK RICK SO THAT WAS COOL BUT I DIDNT REALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT WAS BEING SAID IN ANY OF THE VERSES ESPECIALLY THE SECOND ONE. I DIDNT GET THE POINT OF THE WHOLE SONG
- PifftownBoyz from Queens, New York on 5Sep2006
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like a gay version biggie smalls
the rapping is bad
no style of ability to rhyme
the music is rubbish aswell, sounds like its been made on the spot
the guitar playing is bad aswell
lyrics are terrible
quit now quit now.
- jonnychee from United Kingdom on 5Sep2006
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robotic sound and hip-hop?!
not really colided very nice but all together intresting song....producing could be better tho!
lyrics not bad, beat intresting but not ma taste!
nice chorus with r'n'b acapella...
- LimeniMC from St. Louis, Missouri on 5Sep2006
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Here it is
Beat is Knocking. Real ryder feel. But your voice and lyrics are Wack. Not feeling this cut at all. the flow is terrible
- Beads_TriFecta from Brockton, Massachusetts on 3Sep2006
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yeah
the beat sucks and the lyrics are not dat tight i'm just bein real so don't take it personal
- YunBeezy from Farmerville, Louisiana on 2Sep2006
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Yeah real dope
I like this you probably get hated on but dont worry cause your on the right path..Just clean up your mix a little better and your flow is good less words sometimes do the trick but over all this is not bad
- Ques from Boogie Down Bronx, New York on 1Sep2006
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THIS
I LIKE THE BEAT AND THE DELIVERY. THE CONCEPT OF THE SONG IS GOOD ALSO THE MOOD?......... I REALLY DONT KNOW BUT ITS A KOO SONG
- immortaloutfit from Los Angeles, California on 31Aug2006
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im feeling it a lil like the gutiar
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- bigmike1886 from Baton Rouge, Louisiana on 31Aug2006
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i dont like this
This is really corny and cheesy, the lyrics are terrible and the beat is even worse. stop rapping
- Dankatron from Unspecified on 29Aug2006
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not crazy about it
I like the guitar couner melody around :30. The song is a bit uninteresting though. The beat is only ok, and for hip-hop it has to be spectacular. Try to come up with something cooler. The bass is awesome though. The melodies need work as well. Work on intonation in the singing.
- dougmachiz from Devon, Pennsylvania on 28Aug2006
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Needs Work
The beat is good, but rather overwhelmed by sixteenth notes. Beyond that, the beat seem to skip about a third of a beat every 4 bars. The singing is a bit nasal. Some of the rhymes are coming across weak. The lyrics in the refrain seem to have been made very quickly. The third rapper has trouble keeping to the beat. A combination of low production quality and an aperent lack of effort are tha downfall of this song.
- RandomTask3000 from Richfield, Minnesota on 27Aug2006
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Hot Diggity
Yeh Baby, groovy bass line. This guy can talk, I love the verses they have great feeling I don't like the verses the singer can talk but he's a bit flat when he sings.
- Lennon_Sed from Perth, Wa, Australia on 27Aug2006
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Need some work on some things
first the mix is bad. Get into a studio if you can't do it yourself. The track has to grow with the versws and the hook in this type of song and it doesn't. Last if you are gona be a white rapper your vocabulary skills and sentence and ryhm construction has to be on point. Or else the black crowd will not except you. You have to have rythmn. You have to become black on the inside. you have tobe us .You have to have soul, You have basic stuff Talent. You have to be better than us to be successful. and emenem is. He is dominating or sport like tiger woods.
- jaysgroove from Cincinnati, Ohio on 25Aug2006
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Dean
where this music draw the line i dont know.i dont understand it.beats is weird whick makes me like it but the preformer should have done better than this
- deanmiller from Manchester, United Kingdom on 25Aug2006
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original
The band has asked for comments on:
1 - Performance: Solid beat. I liked the first emcee but did not enjoy the singing or the second emcee...the melody/tonality of both were very jarring.
2 - Song: I like this in a strange way. Probably because it sounds very original. Nice job taking hip hop in your own direction.
3 - Mood: Hard to place...like taking speed and a quelude all at the same time.
- Instrumentality from San Francisco, California on 18Aug2006
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cool song
Good idea on the melody, but it seems like more emphasis was put on rhyming, instead of meaning of the song. Not a bad song. The chorus should be rapped differently, because when it is sung, it is out of key, like most rappers, so don't feel bad. Just maybe stick to what you do best. I like the guitars in the song, and the beat is good.
- cory_norris from Montgomery, Alabama on 17Aug2006
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i dont know..........
the beat is kinda irritating, the hook is lame. the flow fits the beat but thats not sayin alot. get a better beat and u might have somethin
- illindies from Suffolk, Virginia on 17Aug2006
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aight
sounds kinda typical but the verses are tight delivery was very good..nice track for real
- SlimThug4Da05 from Buford, Georgia on 17Aug2006
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iPodMan
This is a cool beat but not that cool. The problem is the lyrics arent awsome. The performance is good if your in England.
- zipodgurus from Hudson, New Hampshire on 15Aug2006
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Zips Review
This is bassy Nice mood good white boy rap the performance is good for Kottonmouth kings. No my cup of mountain dew.,
- ziplokdotcom from Hudson, New Hampshire on 14Aug2006
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Um....
Alright I'm honestly not feelin' this. The song just has a dull vibe and the flowin' honestly isn't doin' nothing for me.
- PheneX from Orlando, Florida on 14Aug2006
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space
Hell yeah. The track and the vocals stick like glue. It's fat but i get the feelin it's a bit overfat. The producer concentrated much on fatness but forgot about the clarity, but... the base flows nicely, and theres some nice synthz insde so that's sweet. The track would benefit from a bit of tubedist here and there and maybe more character on the guitar. More space please. panning would make some space and some reverbs would be nice too. Well th chorus is ... interesting
- maliniaza from Warszawa, Poland on 14Aug2006
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sounds o.k
the mood is definitely captured in the beat...i like the production...sounds like live instruments were played which always gives music an organic feel....the mix of vocals are a bit too low..i cant really hear everything the emcee is saying...the song is good but its not really my kind of hiphop.. the emcee does try to deliver but i feel he falls short in capturing the audience...good song but still needs some work
- KenMasters from Unspecified on 14Aug2006
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bass is tight tho
woah production slammin that bass is wild and the gritty guitars dope, the mc is there thast true.
- beanone76 from Seattle, Washington on 13Aug2006
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wow
I think this could become something hot if it gets into the right hands.I'd like to possibly work with you on something.
- msshan from Minneapolis, Minnesota on 12Aug2006
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its tha boy SCo"cha
I love this beat its hot the verse is ok I think this should have been done differently but its cool
- Slemar500 from Philadelphia, Pennsylvania on 12Aug2006
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Needs A New Mix ASAP
The mix is what messes this track up, cos the beat from i can hear is quite nice. Has a sort of electronica meets Dr Dre vibe to it.
The guitar is much to loud & really dominates the track. Also the first & second lyricist's are both too quiet in comparison to the guitar & when the guitar comes in it makes even harder to hear what they are sayin.
To be honest it seems from what i can hear that there isn't a direct concept at all, so i'm not sure if the mood works. The performance of the guitarists seem on point and the last rapper has a nice delivery, apart from that tho it is very difficult to hear the other instruments clearly at all.
My advice would be to get this track mixed, especially before gettin it reviewed by other musicians. It sounds as though there is some potential there tho.
- KZEN from London, United Kingdom on 12Aug2006
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M4M Review
The intertional rap game is strong, but it's not for everyone. The song is not bad just needs work. The mood is kinda blah, but the track has potential. Keep at it.
- MetaphorATL from Atlanta, Georgia on 12Aug2006
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Enchanting
Excellent contrast in this song, but the first thing I noticed was very slight clipping. The beat is interesting, wasn’t expecting the guitar. The Delivery is off partner. The chorus is straight novice though there is potential. 2nd verse was interesting, changing your delivery completely, unless its someone else. Hard to say since none knows who we reviewin’ there is a darkness in this piece. Your originality is high on this, you went out very good as your enchanting delivery kinda memorizes the senses. Good flip but you know there is room for improvement as revealed above
- ConTaC from Decatur, Georgia on 11Aug2006
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good
good job on the beat i like it. performance is pretty good but you couild use a litle better production. like the guitar it adds alot to the beat. the mood of this song is good i like it. all together this song is pretty damn good keep it up you got some good flow.
- BileNGore from Kaleden B.C., British Columbia, Canada on 11Aug2006
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What are you saying
Poor production. Needs more musical instrumentals. Ok thats better. Too many lyrics to get what your saying. Singing on the hook is not very good. Consider a bit more varations vocally. This is somewhat monotoned as there is no intensity on any of your verses or lines. There is no understandable message. The ending just seems to cut off without notice. Keep working.
- MackTracks2g from Dallas, Texas on 11Aug2006
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